Tuesday, September 28, 2010

In-Progress Crit







































8 comments:

  1. The top two photos are great. The second photo feels very upstaged and real life. The piano photo is very creative.

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  2. Out of these i really enjoy the first. The angle from what it is shot is great and also the subject. I also really like the bottom picture because of the depth of field.

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  3. piano one has great potential for a larger project too. it makes me think of the idea that we are always feeling like we must multitask.

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  4. I like the play of the orange lighting and red hair and colors in her shirt in the office one!

    The piano one is great too! Visual mystery! :)

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  5. Im diggin the piano shot. So playful and fun, well composed too. But it seems a bit grainy. I wonder if you can play with the luminance or do a noise reduction to get rid of some of that.

    The second photo is pretty interesting too. Its so mundane but the color and the pose almost makes it seem set-up. Nice work overall.

    I wasnt going to comment on the third image but its grown on me. How they are hiding their identity. But this one also seems the most real. Its a moment in time, unstaged but still well composed.

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  6. I really like the first image. Very creative and well photographed. I also like the 3rd image, but I wish that you could see just a little bit of her face since you can see a little bit of his, but very nice composition and I like that she is in focus and he isn't.

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  7. Oh gosh I really like the piano picture, pure genius! That angle is really working well, and the color combination is so muted and pretty. The focus on the face is a little bit off, which does draw more attention to the hands, but I don't think it's ENOUGH unfocused to accomplish this if that was your goal... although I would prefer to just see it in better focus. Ugghhh it's such a fun image, awesome job and idea.

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  8. Definitely use the piano image. Maybe you could develop this idea into a series. You could do a little more blending to try to create the illusion of the arms being attached to the subject. It's a very good idea. I'd really like to see the concept developed into an entire series.

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