Final Series Write-Up

Okay, new write-up now that my reality isn't being torn asunder. I must say I underestimated the amount of fingers that would actually be required for the composite. As a result, I spent more time constructing rather than integrating the fingers into a more realistic piece. Maybe They didn't need to be more realistic though, they turned out quite a bit creepier than I intended. Like I said in the critique, the print quality at kinko's was awful, but the murkiness really added to the work as a whole. My roommate mentioned maybe I should include the arms in the shadow, but I'm not sure if that would prevent the monuments from being recognizable. I guess, overall, I don't think this series is portfolio worthy yet. I'd really like to go back in with a lot more time.